08-29-2013, 11:19 AM
Agent Wrote:[COLOR="Silver"][SIZE="2"]Your application was rather.. boring. It wasn't all that long either. Not that it needs to be long, but it could use an improvement. Elaborate more and branch out onto different aspects of how you would be a good addition to the staff team.
I expected more than this. You're capable of making a better application.
It's better than most, I'll give you that.
For now I'll hold, but if you add onto your application it will definitely help.[/SIZE][/COLOR]
Thank you for the advice, I'm was thinking it was abit short myself, I will improve it.

