11-13-2010, 12:16 AM
Hmm, I'm fairly new to the server, but I cannot control myself to criticize currently. Based on the information that you have been demoted due to immaturity shows quite a bit even though you claim to have become more mature. What I wonder is why nobody has necessarily stated directly that you have improved maturity wise. You seem pretty fine otherwise, but the application's content is a bit average. Nothing really stands out in your application, and your reasoning for why you should be hired is too simplistic. There are only 3 main points basically explaining why they should hire you.
>Dedication
>Activity
>Doing your job correctly
There is much more that you can tell us the reader of why you should be chosen. Your responses are too common and can be thought of rather easily. How about telling us your intentions, contributions to the community itself (more in depth), etc. What your application lacks is truly what makes it stand out from the crowd.
>Dedication
>Activity
>Doing your job correctly
There is much more that you can tell us the reader of why you should be chosen. Your responses are too common and can be thought of rather easily. How about telling us your intentions, contributions to the community itself (more in depth), etc. What your application lacks is truly what makes it stand out from the crowd.